Wise words, Douglas.Your poem is also very well done, with some vivid imagery in it. You do a lovely job of appealing to all five sense from touch (your beating heart) to sight (dirty logs) to sound (the banjos in the park). Nice work :)
Wise words, Douglas.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is also very well done, with some vivid imagery in it. You do a lovely job of appealing to all five sense from touch (your beating heart) to sight (dirty logs) to sound (the banjos in the park). Nice work :)